Summer dies
There in the kitchen
From a cold I let in
2.
Including the quarter
In my medicine box
Am I getting better?
For a workshop in the Senryu style of poetry (through deviantArt, and the Writers' Workshop group)
changed them in a redrafting
1.
Summer dies
Here in the kitchen
From a cold I let in
2.
Muffled whispers
Accent the quiet night
In which I write
changed the second one again!
2.
Lovers' muffled whispers
Between box spring groans
A gasp!
before || after
